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All we do is dig,
keep our shovels moving.
Move earth, mound it up,
carve it with dull blades
of prayer.  You don’t need faith
to move a mountain;
You make it something else,
something less real.
Something you couldn’t believe
unless you laid your hands on it.
This was what my father taught me
that God meant.  That the real test
was the labor of Isaac,
how he must have known
that we build our deaths
on obedience—we work
though, as the ram works to free itself
from the thicket.  In these ditches
we dig out foundations,
we dig paths for water, we dig
basements, places for underpinning,
we dig out trenches, we dig quiet
places of rest, all six feet of grandfather’s grave,
we dig when our shovels hit clay,
we dig for fear of rain, we dig
to free ourselves. We dig
to point toward a hill and exclaim
   we worked there—
That God may have made this world,
but we work like hell to make it ours.




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:iconthehungerartist:
Another poem inspired by Phil Levine.
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:iconflesh-unfolding:
I love it. There's a lot of repetition going on but it only enhances the work. A very clear, thoughtful writing style, pleasant to read. The ending is perfect. I really enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing ^ ^
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:iconthehungerartist:
Thanks. Digging is all about repetitive motions, moving stuff to make space, I guess. I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and I'm a sucker for great endings. It's important (I think) that readers have something (perhaps not a meaning, but something) that they can take away from a poem.
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:iconpsychedelic-joi:
I love this! Your poetry is amazing
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:iconthehungerartist:
I hope I replied to this elsewhere (or sent you a note). If not, here's a long belated thanks. I'm very glad you enjoy my work.
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:iconpsychedelic-joi:
I do hope your username is referring to the Kaftka story. :] Love it !!
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:iconthehungerartist:
Yes, it is.
A Hunger Artist has more to say about the production and reception of art than I will probably ever fully understand. For now, thinking on it continues to inspire/humble/horrify me.
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:iconmiss-construe:
There is a focus in your writing that I admire.
The part about Isaac particularly resounded with me
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:iconthehungerartist:
Thank you.
It's nice to have an impact.
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:icondirc:
~Dirc Aug 19, 2006   Writer
You may dig to free yourself but in the end you’re shackling yourself to what you've dug and to the act of digging
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:iconthehungerartist:
Have you been reading too much John Locke? :)
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